Saturday, December 03, 2005

வேறென்ன வேண்டும் இறைவா !!

Hey,
The final post of sindhai sindharal is yet to be written. I may need little more time to think and compile my ideas on what can be done in dealing with mentally affected people!! Will come up soon on that!!

In the past few weeks when I was resting, I felt that God had given me good things in life. Thought of putting them into words. As I recently learned some yaappuilakkanam (paa vagai, seer etc), I thought I should try write some 'venpaaa' . I tried to concentrate on one of the rules for venpaa (syllable splitting and no usage of kaniseer ) . When I came up with this, I found that I forgot about other rules in writing venpaa... freea vittuten.. When I followed just one rule, my choice of words got so limited and I found that its not flowery.. I just admire how those poets of olden days can manage to remember all rules and still make it attractive!!! Chance illa avanga !

Well, this is dedicated to my family, best friends, research and God for giving me good things!!

வேறென்ன வேண்டும் இறைவா!!!

1.
வேறென்ன வேண்டுமினி யெனக்கிங்கு வாழ்வதனில்
பண்பென்ன நெறியென்ன வெனக்காட்டும் அன்னையும்
பாலன்ன உள்ளமொடு நட்பிற்க ழகாய்தந்தை
யும்மீளென வருளிபுவ னத்திலேவீ டுபேறளித்தாய் !!!


Verenna vendum ini enakku ingu vaazvu athanil
panpenna nerienna ena kaatum annaiyum
paalanna ullamodu natpirku azhakaai thanthaiyum
meel ena aruli buvanathil veeduper alithaay!!

(Meaning: What else do I want in life? By giving me a Mom, who shows what is behaviour and what is honesty ( path to be followed) and a Dad , whose heart is as pure as milk and he is the epitome of friendship (he is very helpful and friendly) , you have bestowed me a way by which I can have a heaven on earth )

2.
வேறென்ன வேண்டுமினி யெனக்கிங்கு வாழ்வதனில்
நீயென்ன செய்தாயெ னகேட்குமிந்த வுலகிலிடுக்
கண்ணென்ன வென்றறிய விடாமலென்னு யிர்மெய்சிந்
தையெனவ னைத்தும்காக் கும்நண்பர் களளித்தாய் !!!


Verenna vendum ini enakku ingu vaazvu athanil
neeyenna seythaai ena ketkum indha ulagil
idukkan enna vendru ariya vidaamal en uyir mei sindhai
ena anaithaiyum kaakum nanbarkal aliththaai!!

( Meaning: What else do I want in life? In the world of people who expect ' what have YOU given me?', I have been bestowed with friends who have not let me know what is trouble and they have protected me - my body, my life and my thoughts from being troubled !! )

3.
வேறென்ன வேண்டுமினி யெனக்கிங்கு வாழ்வதனில்
எனக்கென்ன திறனென்ற றியாமடமை நீக்கியேவிஞ்
ஞானமென்ன வென்றறிந்த விஷவியற்சான் றோர்சேர்கை
யளித்தென்ன ருகாமையில் ஆய்வுகூட முமளித்தாய் !!!


Verenna vendum ini enakku ingu vaazhvu adhanil
enakku enna thiran endru ariyaa madamai neeki,
vignyaanam enna vendru arindha vishaviyar saanror serkkai
alithenn arugaamaiyil aayvukoodamum alithaai !!

( Meaning: What else do I want in life? You have made me discover what is my field of interest by removing the ignorance. I am previleged to be associated with scientists in toxicology who know real science and also I am previleged to have a home close to my lab. )

4.
வேறென்ன வேண்டும்வே றென்னவேண்டு மெனக்கோறும்
எனக்குஎன்ன உகந்ததென்று நீயறிவாய் - சிந்தையுட்
புகுந்தென்ன றியாமைவி லக்கியேஎன் உளமகிழ
விருப்பமென யான்கேட்கும் வாழ்வதனை நீயளிப்பாய் !!!


Verenna vendum verenna vendum enak korum
enakku enna ugandhadhu endru neeyarivaai - sindhaiyul
pugunthu en ariyaamai vilakkiye, en ulamakizha
viruppamena yaanketkum vaazvathanai nee alipaai!!

(Meaning: What else do I want? What else do i want? This is how I keep saying. But YOU know what is good for me. You (almighty!) are into my thoughts and have taken off my ignorance (and thus make me wish things that are genuine !! And I believe that ) You will give me the life and things what I really wish for !!! )

19 comments:

TJ said...

Excellent!
Karuthu and Tamizh prayogam arumai!!

If the 'Verenna..' line is put at the last line of the verse rather than the first, it would hve looked more expressive to me.

Priya said...

hey tj
thats what i initailly thought.. but this phrase' verenna vendum ' was lingering so much on my head that i could not think anything ahead..so, i satisfied my self by starting so and then thot about proceeding further!!
thanks!!

Jeevan said...

Good!!

I read this Thought like a song. Verenna vendum, Verenna vendum, ini enakku ingu vaazvu athanil…

The 1st one is very nice.

Anonymous said...

ப்ரியா, எனக்கு வெண்பா எழுத தெரியாது; ஆனால் ரசனை உண்டு. நீ எழுதியிருப்பது மிகவும் நன்று.
இங்கு நீ சொல்லும் கருத்துக்கள் என் வாழ்கைக்கும் பொருந்தும்.
"வேறென்ன வேண்டுமினி யெனக்கிங்கு வாழ்வதனில்" என்ற நிறைவு இருந்தாலும், உன் எழுத்துகளை படித்தபின்பு இன்னும் ஒன்றே ஒன்று வேண்டுமென ஆசை தோன்றியுள்ளது!

"என் உளமகிழ
விருப்பமென யான்கேட்கும் வாழ்வதனை நீயளிப்பாய் !!!"

மறைந்திருந்து பார்க்கும் மர்மமாய் இருப்பதற்க்கு மன்னிக்க்வும்.

Anonymous said...

chance illa...
romba romba nalla irukku.
Brilliant.

-vv

Kay said...

Remba Nalla irunthathu Priya
Nee eluthinathu'la oru thelivu irunthathu...Nice one

Kay

Senthil said...

Very nice quotes. Excellent job!

Senthil.

Priya said...

jeevan
paataa.. naala irukke.thanks..en kavithaikkum tune podapattirukkunnu nenacha sandhosamaa irukku!!!thanks jeevan..

anonymous,
maraindhirundhu paarparthu ungal sudhandhiram- adhu mannikappadalaam.
aanaal vallina 'r'kku pinbu 'k' meiezhuthu serpathu(in the word irupatharku) mannikappada mudiyaadha onru:)- just kidding
btw,
nizhalum nijamum eppodhum ondralla !
uyrum uyirpetruvaruvadhum eppodum azhakalla !

vv,
thanks...venpaannu aasaiyaa nenachen . but, edho kavithaiyaa dhaan vandhadhu.

idhukku brilliant ellam UNGAkite irundhu kedaikkumnnu nenakala!!

kay,
adhu enna 'thelivu' patha?
ennaku inni varaikkum theriyaadha onnu adhu..mmm. ne paathanna sari.:)- thanks !

thanks senthil

Kay said...

Telivu naa solla vanthatha alaga sonna maathri irunthathu...

dinesh said...

Super !! Unakkulle ivlo periya "kavi" irukkaradhu theriyaama pocchche ? :)

Prabu Karthik said...

marabu kavidhai ellam lesana vishyam illai nu theriyum.
pudu kavidhai kooda kahtam daan.
aana indha attempt pramadham priya.

namakku indha seer ellam theriyadhu
vaadhiyar solli kuduthaar.. naan dhan padikala...:(

this also reminds me of "kurai ondrum illai" by rajaji and rendred by that immortal MS.

Priya said...

okie kay
dinesh,
ungala ennaala nambave mudiyaadhu..eppovume tease pannuveenga.. ippo kooda paarungalen..neengale 'kavi'nnu theriyama sonna kooda ennakku thappa dhaan theriudhu. 'kavi' in pure tamil means 'monkey':)-

pk,
rajaji enga naan enga.. oru nimsham engayoo poyiten.. sooper ponga!!!

யாத்திரீகன் said...

enaku venpaavoda illakanemellam maranthuduchu.. aanaalum.. athil ulla karuthai arumaiya velipaduthi irukeenga..

evlo seekiram yaarala ipdi solira mudiyum.. verenna vendum-nu.. nalla sinthanaigalai ungalukul vithaitha..unga thaai thanthaiku hats off..

-
செந்தில்/Senthil

Muthukumar Puranam said...

You are always giving lotta homework in pirithezhuthuga. If there is no particular reason, neeye sandhi pirichu sadharana vaarthaigalai pottu ezhuthalame..easy irukum padika.
Anyways as always kavithaila kalakitta.

Priya said...

thanks yaathrigan ( for appa amma)

pb, naan indha sylabble pirikardhukku thaan avlo kastapatten..kavaithai ezhutha it took around just 1.5 hrs ..seer pirikka dhaan it took longer than 3 hrs..
i had no patience to split and type in tamil again . but for people to understand , i have written the syllables split in the english version..thanks

sen said...

nice poem.

Anonymous said...

>>aanaal vallina 'r'kku pinbu 'k' meiezhuthu serpathu(in the word irupatharku) mannikappada mudiyaadha onru:)- just kidding

Thank you. This rule I'll never forget now on.

>>nizhalum nijamum eppodhum ondralla !
uyrum uyirpetruvaruvadhum eppodum azhakalla !

I don't understand what you mean by the second line.
But I do agree that the 'image' and the 'source of image' could be poles apart. You yourself have included the conditional clause "eppodhum"; means, atleast sometimes the extrapolation based on the image could match the source!
I was refering to my extrapolation of the perceived image. That's it.

Cheers.
anonymous, again.

PS: Please do explain the second line. Thanks.

Priya said...

well .
u got what i meant..the image and the source of image do not coincide always..but i coincides.. u r smart.mmmm

by the second line, i meant that the source and creation of something by the source may not be appealing to the same extent always..

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